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I have to revise unclear pronoun references, but i'm a little stuck. can you help me?

I have to revise the unclear pronoun refernces in the sentences i'm given, but i'm stuck on a couple of them.
what do i have to do to these sentences:

"Sara asked mom if she could write to the Mail Preference Service, Direct Marketing Association and ask that our names not be sold to mailing-list companies."

"When we do waste products, inventing new ways to use them becomes a challenge in creative thinking; one of them was mine."

thanks for any help you can give me. =]

"Sara asked mom to write to the Mail Preference Service, Direct Marketing Association to ask that our names not be sold to mailing-list companies."

"When we do waste products, inventing new ways to use them becomes a challenge in creative thinking; one of the ideas was mine."
or
I had a creative idea about how to use waste products. ( keep it simple)

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